Why our school's morning tea should be longer

In my opinion, I definitely think our school's morning tea should be longer.

They expect all the kids to eat, play, have a drink and go to the toilet all in twenty minutes. That is so unfair!!!

The teachers get to spend all the time they want in the staffroom and come to class after the bell. That is unacceptable.

I feel that 2o minutes is not enough. As soon as you go down to the field the bell would ring and if you go all the way back up you would probably be late for class.

So I hope all these ideas have persuaded you that morning tea should be longer.

I Shreya have read your writing and I like how you used cool vocab. In order to improve you need to use hight punctuation.In my opinion, I definitely think our school's morning tea should be longer.

They expect all the kids to eat, play, have a drink and go to the toilet all in twenty minutes. That is so unfair!!!

The teachers get to spend all the time they want in the staffroom and come to class after the bell. That is unacceptable.

I feel that 2o minutes is not enough. As soon as you go down to the field the bell would ring and if you go all the way back up you would probably be late for class.

So I hope all these ideas have persuaded you that morning tea should be longer.

I Shreya have read your writing and I like how you used cool vocab. In order to improve you need to use high punctuation.