Sunday 9 December 2018

WALT:Write a prediction for what a story might be about based on the given keywords

There were two girls named Lili and Ana. lili liked delivering circulars and Ana was always in the  buggy. Today  they took off in a hurry, they were running around the streets like mad until they reached a particular house, they knew they would get paid here. Then Lili put the buggy’s brakes on.  “Sorry girls, I got sick, lost my job and it's bad, I’m really sorry but I can't pay you today.”the man at the door cried

“No worries and I am very sorry you lost your job and got sick.” Lili said solemnly.

WALT: Evaluate our prediction after reading the story (Junkmail by Prue Hilson, Pt3, No.3, 1995)

I give my prediction a 1/10. I predicted correctly that people deliver circulars however I predicted that two girls went up to a man's house and he said that he got sick and lost his job that part was wrong.

Wednesday 5 December 2018

Where am I describing?

Where am I describing?

It is awake 24/7.
You can shop here.
You put your bags on a conveyor belt.
I see a sign in capital letters that says WHITTAKERS..
An elevator takes me up to my destination.
“Bye” people say sorrowfully, as they leave.
The doors open and you wait for an hour to board your vehicle.
There are lots of places to eat before you go.
The crew help you  get ready to board.
There is a long line till you hop onto your mode of transportation.
Where am I describing?