My play date with Krisha

My play date with Krisha

In the holidays I had a play date with Krisha.(My BFF).

First her brother walked her up to my new house. Then Krisha gave me a delicious M and M chocolate block.

After that I gave her a tour of my house. Some time later me and Krisha got our hair braided and put beads at the bottom.(Our hair kept getting stuck in the electronic braider, it was painful).

Then we played with some very soft slime and after that I showed her some of my drawings. By the time I showed her half of my drawings her brother had come to pick her up.

I had a great and enjoyable time. I hope she did to?
I like how you used punctuation like brackets. Samantha