Sunday, 9 December 2018

WALT:Write a prediction for what a story might be about based on the given keywords

There were two girls named Lili and Ana. lili liked delivering circulars and Ana was always in the  buggy. Today  they took off in a hurry, they were running around the streets like mad until they reached a particular house, they knew they would get paid here. Then Lili put the buggy’s brakes on.  “Sorry girls, I got sick, lost my job and it's bad, I’m really sorry but I can't pay you today.”the man at the door cried

“No worries and I am very sorry you lost your job and got sick.” Lili said solemnly.

WALT: Evaluate our prediction after reading the story (Junkmail by Prue Hilson, Pt3, No.3, 1995)

I give my prediction a 1/10. I predicted correctly that people deliver circulars however I predicted that two girls went up to a man's house and he said that he got sick and lost his job that part was wrong.

Wednesday, 5 December 2018

Where am I describing?

Where am I describing?

It is awake 24/7.
You can shop here.
You put your bags on a conveyor belt.
I see a sign in capital letters that says WHITTAKERS..
An elevator takes me up to my destination.
“Bye” people say sorrowfully, as they leave.
The doors open and you wait for an hour to board your vehicle.
There are lots of places to eat before you go.
The crew help you  get ready to board.
There is a long line till you hop onto your mode of transportation.
Where am I describing?









Thursday, 27 September 2018

My colour poem

Pink
What does pink look like?
Pink looks like a cupboard.

What does pink sound like?
Pink sounds like ice in a pink lemonade shaking.

What does pink taste like?
Pink tastes like refreshing bubble gum in my mouth.

What does pink feel like?
Pink feels like a soft flamingo having a nice warm drink in the lake.

What does pink smell like?
Pink smells like a cold strawberry ice cream on a hot tropical day.

What does pink remind me of?
Pink reminds me of bright pink paint running down a piece of artwork




Tuesday, 18 September 2018

My book review

My book review
‘Gangsta Granny’ is by David Walliams and the illustrator is Tony Ross. David Walliams has put lots of sophisticated words in the story.

David Walliams has also put lots of funny words and lots of adjectives. Tony Ross has put lots of interesting and entertaining pictures which will make everybody laugh.

‘Gangsta Granny’ is about a little boy named Ben and he thinks his Grandma is boring but he finds out that she is actually a robber. He knows his grandma wants to steal the crown jewels from the queen.

My favourite character is granny because she tricks Ben and makes him think she is boring.

Most peoples favourite part of the book is when the neighbor, Mr Parker comes and spies on grandma and Ben. Granny tries to do yoga on one foot while she is naked.

I like the book because it is humorous and interesting. I would recommend this book to everyone.

The star rating I would give it is five out of five. Overall Gangsta Granny is an amazing book and everyone who reads it will love it just like me.

Wednesday, 12 September 2018

My BFF Krisha

My BFF Krisha
My BFF krisha is super cool because she remembers everything and helps everyone. One not very cool thing about her is that she argues a lot. Sometimes she can be interesting but my friend Krisha is the best.She also is very nice and caring and never gives up. If something is hard she says I haven't got it yet. Whenever I go to gymnastics on Thursdays she says “I will come and watch you to see how well you do”. After gymnastics she always says very good or well done. Krisha is the best.