synonyms and alternative words for secret

There should be fewer children in a classroom

In my opinion, I think that there should be fewer students in the classroom.

One of my thoughts is that if there are too many kids in a class then the teacher will take longer to do tests and also, the mat would be really squished and all the sweaty boys' smell would kill you to death.

Another one of my reasons is that if you are calling for your teacher, it would probably take ages for him/her to come to you. Soon you will be sitting as straight as a tree to slouching like a grandma.

This is another thought of mine. It is if the children are all asking the teacher different questions all at the same time, the teacher’s mind would probably BLOW!! And, the teacher would go home with a headache (It would probably sound like a zoo)

If the teacher needs to help every single kid in the classroom the teacher would get tired and so would you.

Well then, I hope all of my reasons have persuaded you that there should be fewer kids in a class bye for now!

Good punctuation and put more vocabulary. By Garuth.

Leave Narrated by Sanah

Why our school's morning tea should be longer

In my opinion, I definitely think our school's morning tea should be longer.

They expect all the kids to eat, play, have a drink and go to the toilet all in twenty minutes. That is so unfair!!!

The teachers get to spend all the time they want in the staffroom and come to class after the bell. That is unacceptable.

I feel that 2o minutes is not enough. As soon as you go down to the field the bell would ring and if you go all the way back up you would probably be late for class.

So I hope all these ideas have persuaded you that morning tea should be longer.

I Shreya have read your writing and I like how you used cool vocab. In order to improve you need to use hight punctuation.In my opinion, I definitely think our school's morning tea should be longer.

They expect all the kids to eat, play, have a drink and go to the toilet all in twenty minutes. That is so unfair!!!

The teachers get to spend all the time they want in the staffroom and come to class after the bell. That is unacceptable.

I feel that 2o minutes is not enough. As soon as you go down to the field the bell would ring and if you go all the way back up you would probably be late for class.

So I hope all these ideas have persuaded you that morning tea should be longer.

I Shreya have read your writing and I like how you used cool vocab. In order to improve you need to use high punctuation.

Jump Jam

This morning we had Jump Jam, and can you believe it The Jump Jam leader(Brett) was there!

After we waited about HALF AN HOUR my friend Zara said: “He’s here”!! “Finally” I replied.

Our first song was ‘Can’t stop the feeling’ and I loved it. I knew the second song but I don’t know what it was called. Our third song was the ‘Coconut’ song (That one was my favourite because the teachers danced on the stage). And finally, the last song was the Minion song from Despicable Me.

I loved having Brett at Halsey Drive. I hope he comes again soon.

I Aisha have read your writing. I like how you structured your story. You could improve on vocab words.

Tuatua poem-narrated by Sanah

Space Nuts at Light Speed-Narrated by Sanah and Charlie