Thursday, 14 March 2019

Candyland

Candy Land
“Oh my god i’m lost... wait a sec is this Candyland?” I said to myself. 
“Yes this is Candyland” whispered a Giant
Cookie.
”Why are you whispering?” I said in a loud voice.
“Because the queen and king chocolate bars are sleeping and so is their daughter." The grass was made of delicious green sour patch kids.

"I secretly ate some of the Giant Cookie’s cupcake house." In the distance I could smell tasty peanut butter biscuits. The marshmallow were as soft as a fluffy pillow.

Sunday, 9 December 2018

WALT:Write a prediction for what a story might be about based on the given keywords

There were two girls named Lili and Ana. lili liked delivering circulars and Ana was always in the  buggy. Today  they took off in a hurry, they were running around the streets like mad until they reached a particular house, they knew they would get paid here. Then Lili put the buggy’s brakes on.  “Sorry girls, I got sick, lost my job and it's bad, I’m really sorry but I can't pay you today.”the man at the door cried

“No worries and I am very sorry you lost your job and got sick.” Lili said solemnly.

WALT: Evaluate our prediction after reading the story (Junkmail by Prue Hilson, Pt3, No.3, 1995)

I give my prediction a 1/10. I predicted correctly that people deliver circulars however I predicted that two girls went up to a man's house and he said that he got sick and lost his job that part was wrong.

Wednesday, 5 December 2018

Where am I describing?

Where am I describing?

It is awake 24/7.
You can shop here.
You put your bags on a conveyor belt.
I see a sign in capital letters that says WHITTAKERS..
An elevator takes me up to my destination.
“Bye” people say sorrowfully, as they leave.
The doors open and you wait for an hour to board your vehicle.
There are lots of places to eat before you go.
The crew help you  get ready to board.
There is a long line till you hop onto your mode of transportation.
Where am I describing?









Thursday, 27 September 2018

My colour poem

Pink
What does pink look like?
Pink looks like a cupboard.

What does pink sound like?
Pink sounds like ice in a pink lemonade shaking.

What does pink taste like?
Pink tastes like refreshing bubble gum in my mouth.

What does pink feel like?
Pink feels like a soft flamingo having a nice warm drink in the lake.

What does pink smell like?
Pink smells like a cold strawberry ice cream on a hot tropical day.

What does pink remind me of?
Pink reminds me of bright pink paint running down a piece of artwork